Positives
- Opening shot to establish the idea
- PAN in shot 2 was executed well
- Creative framing and TILT down in shot 5
- CU at end used to get an emotional reaction
Negatives
- JUMP CUT created between shots 1 and 2
- Lack of Match between shots 2 and 3, repetition of her running
- Actor should have run into frame in shot 4, hair already visible
- Too static at the beginning of shot 2, 30-degree rule broken
- Would be better if camera was facing actor after the corridor shots
- Long pauses at the beginning of shots, doesn't flow
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